beautyandthefish

hey, I thought that I should definitely review your stories since you've been so kind and helpful to me. This seems like a great beginning, though things seem a little ...

Wow, I have to say this is really quite good. You seem to have a lot of knowledge about martial arts, poses, etc. which really helps me get an image ...

Hey. This is a very good start. I've decided to point out one more error that I haven't seen anyone else correct I wish that I could get rid of ...

Hey! I love your characters, they're very fully developed. I feel no need to point out any grammatical errors, seeing as that has already been done, but I would like ...

That was beautifully written, and I'm curious how the contest turned out. PM me? Anyhoo, back to the story. I really enjoyed your voice, perfect in those sweet little love ...

Hey, This is a very cute story I love the voice you used You just have a few minor errors/typos: “Because he plastered on every paper in DC, I just ...

I can completely see this fitting into one of the books somewhere, just one of those fluffy little scenes that all of us fans die for, and don't get alot ...

I absolutely adore Jodi Picoult. One of my favorite stories by her was My Sister's Keeper. I could deeply relate because my sister has also been in very extreme medical ...

First of all, I'd like to say that this was very beautiful and poetic, and I liked the use of old style words, to give it a more rare feel. ...

I don't really understand the comedy in it, if there is any, but I really could connect with you. I don't think it needs too much else, if you're basing ...

What a wonderfully detailed story! I was so pulled in by your descriptions, and I could see the characters in my mind. I have to say, the blood part was ...