ballerina13

Hello! I love this. It has a lot of imagery and the message is subtle and artistic. I, personally, enjoyed the first one better than the second. First one was ...

Hello! This was sweet and heartwrenching. I loved the first to paragraphs. You developed a character that we want to know what happens to. I think that her being sink ...

Hello! I enjoyed this but the sentence structure was a bit short. Along with a few spelling errors. Besides that I really liked reading this. You developed your character well ...

Hello! I enjoyed reading this and I love the idea. It has potential. Although, I feel that it is to short.Are you going to add more to it? In the ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this. But I feel that you should elaborate on the couple in the beginning. At first you think that they are teenagers but later in the ...

Hello again! I like how this is developing. I have a question though, Did you change your MC's name? Because in the last chapther it was not Katarinna. Just wondering. ...

Hello! What you are writing about is a touchy subject for most people...a sad time in history. But! I enjoyed reading it very much. Your style is nice and I ...

Hello! This was so clever and fun to read. It really brought forth the message of how valuable our planet is. Although, it was very short. I feel that if ...

Hello! This was very good. It was so sad and heartfelt. The emotion was dead on and the descpritions made me feel as if I was there. The others have ...

Hello!This poem was so cute! I loved it. It has great flow and rhythm. I do not think that exclaimation point at the was unneccesary though. You might want to ...

This was good. Short, concise, to the point. In one paragraph you explained such an event that shaped a new era in a way. It is factual. But I think ...

Hello! First, would like to mention to you that I really enjoyed this piece. As others have already noted, it is best to run spell-check before posting. There were just ...

Hello! This is very good. It so different from classic fairytales and Disney's interpretation. I really enjoyed the prologue. I do think that you could lengthen it a bit more ...

Hello! This was amazing! The flow and fluidity of the words was right on so good job on that. The description really paints a picture for me. As I read ...

This was amazing! I loved it. It is so sad though. Your piece had so much depth and emotion. There were a few parts were the flow was interrupted such ...