babymagic18

This was good I really liked it the way you drew my attention the title also caught my attention. I am pretty sure the others hit the spot with what ...

This is definetly something in which I have never read before it was very good keep up the good work. You make the readers want to read more and that ...

This is a very good piece. You only need to work on the paragraphs I feel they are too bunched up. Other than that keep it up.

This was okay I guess. I liked the title it grabbed my attention and that is important when you are drawing the readers attention. Other than that it was good ...

This really needs some work. Capitalization and paragraphs are the big issues. It was a bit long and that drew my attention away and thats not a good thing. But ...

I was a little confused by the beggining. It was a little long and I think you could have found a way to shorten it. Other than that I think ...

Oh wow I like this alot a little long but it made me honestly want to read more. You are a talented writer I must say. Keep it up. I ...

I have told this way to many times to people. Shorten the stories. It draws others away if it is to long and you want their attention and good review. ...

This was a very good piece I must say a bit long for my taste but I will let that pass this time. I liked the way you detailed things. ...

This was beautiful in all honesty. You made me think that I could put a whole new depth into my pieces, I thank you for that. It was a little ...

I really should not be saying anything but I liked this I don't know how to write poetry but I thought I would give into reading one. Keep it up.

Uh, it was okay but it was really long and that can tend to draw people away from your writing and you don't want that. Other than that I liked ...

I liked this piece it really drew me in and that's what you are looking to do as a writer. The title also caught my attention so thumbs up on ...

This was cute a little short but then again it is a diary entry so I really can't expect it to be long. Oh you might want to add a ...

It was good a little lengthy but other than that it was good I enjoyed reading your work. I can't say I really have anything to comment on. Keep it ...