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Thanks for the feedback, You guys! :D I'll start editing asap. But if I do rewrite a few chapters, Violet may not be written out after all... And the in ...

Thanks so much for the review, guys!!! Again, I can't express how much I appreciate all of your help!! And BlackSheep, I know what the ACT's are... A Crappy Test ...

Thanks guys for all the reviews... And sorry Jenth, I feel bad now :/

Thanks for reviewing :) And I got attached to her myself :((

Thanks so much for the reviews :) Lately things here have been rough. I haven't been able to get "Him" off my mind. I can't sleep any more and I ...

Thanks so much!! :)

I don't have a critique. I just had to say that this is EXACTLY what I'm experiencing as I type! :;( I love the way you wrote it, too, by ...

I don't have a critique. I just had to say that this is EXACTLY what I'm experiencing as I type! :;( I love the way you wrote it, too, by ...

Thanks alot for the help :) I'll start editing as soon as possible I pinky promise! The iPhone makes it all complicated :/

It's obvious I have a lot of rewriting and editing to do. Bear with me you guys. I've never written fantasy before or a novel so this is all a ...

Thanks for all the excellent feedback guys :)

Thanks for all the help you guys :) I'll edit as soon as I get to a computer. The only issue that I've had with the iPhone is the inability ...

well you guys, i'm flattered by all of this. but mostly i'm honored. i honestly didn't think people would actually read this. so thank you all

awww! ya'll guys are so sweet! thank you for the reviews!

yeah working on writing more but darn it I have the worst case of writer's block write now! lol. I'll let you know when I've posted some more chapters. I ...