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Hey, so I'm going to assume along with everyone else that this is an informative piece you need revised for school? So my review will be all grammar. "He grew ...

Hey interesting first chapter. So here's a review. Grammar first. For the length of this chapter, I didn't notice too many grammar errors, which was a good thing. "The tall ...

First of all, this short story was very vivid and brief. Although we're thrown into it right away, you do a great job of introducing background information while progressing with ...

This is quite a simple, lovely story. You took the whole triangle love and spun it with a nice, unique perspective. Of course, you ended the story on a happier ...

Hi, An interesting topic you bring up. I'm not sure if this relates to your topic, but I have a friend who classified introverts and extroverts in a slightly modified ...

Hi! I'll review this as I read along. The first part with the two twin sisters fighting was endearing. That is actually how twins play (I know from experience) and ...

Hi! I'll be reviewing as I read along, so forgive me if I seem confused halfway through. This sentence was a bit too long. You should try to break it ...

I've actually seen this before in a drama. In that drama, this guy hires a girl to pretend to be his girlfriend, but then he actually pays her more later ...

Well, I'll be honest. Perhaps because it's flash fiction, but it's a little hard for me to understand. So, it seems like a very deep piece that hints at human ...

Hi, This was quite a head spinner! I liked the last two lines the best. This poem/narrative piece reminds me of that saying where they say love and hate is ...

This was a very interesting story. Overall, I like how you use one specific instance (the one where he is sitting and his mom is slicing tomatoes) to introduce a ...

Wow, this was surprisingly ambitious. Since your profile says you're a guy, it means you tried to write the view point of a girl. The reason why I say this ...

Oh man, that was the question I was wondering. Whether or not you sent the email. You know, you probably remember the piece I put up. When you're just tired ...

Hey, just came back for the first chapter, lol! Also, the only mistake I noticed was that you spell Anna and Ana. Make sure to go back to that typo. ...

Hey...who said Chemistry was easy?! Lol, enjoyed this chapter. Although I didn't read the first one, I have a feeling I sort of understand what's going on. Which, by the ...