averyismediocre

Oh! That was supposed to read together with the final line of the stanza to say "I wish I could forget who I am to make the problems go away." ...

Thank you so much! You have an incredible day as well!

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback!

Hi! Thank you for liking my poem! And thank you for catching my mistakes. If you wouldn't mind, could you tell me what lines have errors so I can fix ...

Wow! Thank you so much!

Also, I'm honestly not the best with metaphors and imagery but I will try my best to use some in the future! Thank you for that suggestion!

Hi! Thank you for this review! I also realized that dissociate didn't match the poem but I wrote this to be as truthful as possible and I literally would use ...

Thank you!

Hi! First of all, thank you. Also, I find your comment and perception of my poem so interesting because I originally wrote this about my horrible mental state. I was ...

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Thank you!

It's a rhyming pattern! Last time I did this pattern, people were confused about the writing so I decided to be clear about my rhyme scheme beforehand.

Also, I would consider changing the title to something shorter like just, "I am cold." because yours is kind of lengthy. That's up to you though.

It's fine! I just wanted to make it clear that there was, in fact, a rhyme scheme. Thank you for the constructive criticism! (That sounded passive aggressive but it wasn't. ...

Oh no, you weren't rude at all. I enjoy constructive criticism. I just wanted to explain what I did.