averagedreamer

Hey there I think your poem is good, you have a really good idea of what you want to write about and how to write it. I like that you're ...

Mizzle is right about your structure. I agree with what she said. You poem is free verse but it still needs some kind of structure. It's like you're just listing ...

Hey there. So this is my first review, hopefully it won't be so bad and you'll like it. I like your poem because it's about trees. :) Trees are awesome! ...