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Hey Leela, thanks for the great review! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! Regarding the quote - OF COURSE you can write it in your notebook! I feel so ...

I'm so glad you liked the story! This review really made my day... thanks so much!

Hey J! Thanks for the review! I will definitely try to shorten the story in my editing and make unnecessary long sentences shorter. I'm glad you liked the ending! Thanks ...

Hey! Thanks for the amazing review! I understand what you mean about the change in tense being confusing and not flowing that smoothly, and I will try to change this ...

Hey! Thanks for the great review, it really helped! I see what you mean about trimming the sentences and making the story shorter - I will definitely take that into ...

Thank you!! This is such a sweet review and really made my day:) I see what you mean by adding more details (I love knowing all the details as well) ...

Haha glad you understand it! Also I'm glad you like the new first sentence - your help is much appreciated! Thanks again for the great review

Hey Sky! Thanks for the great review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story :) Regarding the word 'surface', I agree that it probably sounds better as 'resurface' - thanks! Also, ...

Hey Julia! Thanks a lot for the sweet and helpful review :) I changed the first sentence and made it shorter (not sure if it's better now). Let me explain ...

Hi! Thank you for your review. I think that would probably make the story a little more realistic if I expanded on the her past with him, and I did ...

I truly enjoyed reading this story. The way you built it up, effectively using imagery that brought a sense of peace was incredible. Closer to the end of the story ...