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ashleysweeney

  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Aborted Child

    First off, congrats on successfully writing about an extremely touchy subject, and doing it without being crude. Personally, while I don't condone using abortion as a form of birth control, ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Take Me Away

    ok, first off, let me say that I really like this poem. I just have a few nitpicks. Take me away, to the land of my dreams. Where its just ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Kiss me when I'm sober

    Perhaps we should not kiss tonight, Beneath the hazy silver light; Intoxicated by the fumes Of cigarettes and cheap perfume. I love the description here. Perhaps we should not dance ...

    Dec 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: My Robin Hood Chapt. 2

    First off, i want to say i really like the plot of this story. however, I too am writing an historical novel and I have had to do a ton ...

    Oct 28, 2010


You are all the colours in one, at full brightness.
— Jennifer Niven, 'All the Bright Places'