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Re: My Aborted Child
First off, congrats on successfully writing about an extremely touchy subject, and doing it without being crude. Personally, while I don't condone using abortion as a form of birth control, ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Take Me Away
ok, first off, let me say that I really like this poem. I just have a few nitpicks. Take me away, to the land of my dreams. Where its just ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Kiss me when I'm sober
Perhaps we should not kiss tonight, Beneath the hazy silver light; Intoxicated by the fumes Of cigarettes and cheap perfume. I love the description here. Perhaps we should not dance ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: My Robin Hood Chapt. 2
First off, i want to say i really like the plot of this story. however, I too am writing an historical novel and I have had to do a ton ...
Oct 28, 2010
