ashleylee

I'm back :D But beneath those weird looks and rough looks was the heart of a gentle man. I wouldn't use "looks" in so close proximity by each other. Maybe ...

Hola, Bri! I know, you're probably wondering where on earth I've been and why it's taken me so long to edit this but I guess I can't give you an ...

Hey, Bri! I’m sorry that it has taken me so long to get to this. I’ve been totally overwhelmed with school this past few weeks so I apologize. He, one ...

Hello again, Merry! Back for more! “What's the matter? The ladies not work with you?” I think you mean “working” instead of “work” but I’m not sure. This kind of ...

Hey, Merry! I couldn’t resist coming over here to look at your work after you sent me that PM about all your new stories. They were too interesting to ignore ...

Hannah, my goodness, I’m so so sorry that I couldn’t get to this till now. I just checked my “Will Review for Food” thread and saw that you posted so ...

Hey, luc! I'm working on your Titleless Story as we speak but I decided to give you an extra review since I'm taking so long :oops: But not guilty enough ...

Hey, Bri. I'm back and ready to review =] The leaves quivered at the wind’s mercy as the wind blew about the boy and girl. I wouldn't use "wind" in ...

Hey, Trashytoni. This caught my attention right away because of the title and your little blurp underneath. It definitely caught my attention =] I placed my briefcase on the desk ...

Hey, Dianis! Hopefully I am of some help to you today =] But that was the only place I could go, the only place I felt truly at home. I ...

Hey, KG! Hopefully I am of some help to you today =] Red is for words that you need to add or ones I fixed Bold is all my comments ...

Hello! Hopefully I am of some help to you today =] Red are the words you need to add or words that I corrected Bold are my comments and concerns. ...

Hello, Fadingdream. I hope I am of some help to you today =] Three days since I last saw you. Okay, this sentence isn't needed in your paragraph. The reader ...

Hey, Bri. You called for a critique-r and here I am, answering that call =] Red is all the words that you need to add or words that I changed. ...

Hello, Broken Vain. I hope I am of some help to you today =] I laid my head against the cold desk’s top. "Desktop" is one word so there is ...