ashleylee

Again, I am copy/pasting. I'm so sorry Scasha, that it took me so long to get to this. I hope this all has been helping you! Well, here is my ...

This was so sad :( But before I give you my opinion, I will show you some things I noticed in your story. I noticed she was had a beaded ...

I really enjoyed this prologue as well. But, I must say that it was too short for my taste. I really would have loved to find out who this compassionate ...

Okay, I know this is horrible but I can't read your story right now. I read the first three paragraphs and you caught my attention right away...but I can't finish. ...

Again, very VERY good. I agree with RandomGrrl that bringing Zoe in but from Daniel's point of view was a nice touch. Well, since I have posted on all of ...

Hey, thanks for telling me that you posted more.... *sighs, feeling hurt that you forgot to PM her* But yes, of course, I think this story is getting better and ...

Hello, I've been working on correcting your story for awhile and finally got done so...here I am posting it! :wink: All I did was copy/paste it and then did all ...

hello, I usually stay away from R rated things as well but I don't think this was graphic as some others I have read. Actually, I don't think this was ...

Hey Esme, I really, REALLY liked this! :D I agree with bittersweet, that I have always wondered what a child vampire would be like. And you did it beautifully. It's ...

Wow, this is SO much easier to read now that you spaced it out! :D Okay, I just copy/pasted it and put all my corrections in bold, So, here is ...

Melkor: Okay, I started this but now, my parents are saying that I have to get off the internet. Ugg, and your story was just getting good! So yeah, you ...

Hello, I must say that this story was immensely interesting! Your little blurb before I started reading, explaining the "round the bend" saying really caught my attention. Plus, the whole ...

Decided to copy/paste again. Hope you don't mind...:? Well, here I go :D Chapter Two Noise. That’s what woke me up. A large clang sounded near my eardrums and I ...

I decided to copy/paste this. Easier to read and Easier to correct! :wink: Chapter One “Melody”. I froze, my heartbeat quickening as I glanced from side to side. I wasn’t ...

Very Good! I loved your descriptions. And your story is so different and unique that it kept me reading. So you score tons of points there! :wink: You caught my ...