ashleylee

Heya, Lucyy! I saw this and it caught my eye so I decided to give you a review! Hope this helps! Prologue I stumbled along the beach, avoiding the glances ...

Oh, we finally get to meet Leo!!!! I hope he is the good guy he is made out to be cause I’ll be really upset if he isn’t. I didn’t ...

Your chapters are so down-to-earth. It’s like I am reading a diary entry or listening to my friend tell me about her day. But they can’t just be that. You ...

This is a cute thought, Mars. And this is real? This actually happened to you? Now I’m really excited to read more of this! The only thing is that you ...

This is a really cool idea, Gracee. I’m excited to see where this goes :wink: Now, I see that already two people have mentioned the grammatical errors and the “I” ...

Heya, Happy! I'm back and ready to review! So here I go... I am sick of this!” cried the young man in outburst. He paced the hall with irritation, his ...

Jasmine, you HAVE to write more of this. I feel like I am reading a novel right now. It is that good. If this book was in the store, I ...

Gosh, my opinion of Jasper is really changing. I don’t really like him anymore. How can he just ditch Genna without clearing things up between them first. He’s just going ...

I don’t like thinking that Genna is the rebound girl. I want to think of Jasper as the perfect guy…but you are ruining that for me, jasmine. I’m starting to ...

Again, I loved every minute of it. But this chapter felt kind of rushed to me. Some of the ideas you had in here were overlooked until now. Like her ...

I’m sorry, but I must admit that I am on the bandwagon of those who like your long chapters. This was too short for me. I wanted more! :wink: Again, ...

So cute! I just can’t get enough of this story. I seriously think you could make a book out of this, jasmine! I really do! :D The only thing that ...

Another amazing chapter! I never would have guessed that outcome…holy cow you are good! :D But I do think that Genna’s reaction to Damien being a vampire and stuff just ...

What??!! Damien knows about Jasper! That’s crazy! The ending was kind of abrupt. I felt like you picked an odd spot to end. I would try to make that smoother. ...

Genna has seizures?? Oh gosh, that was a shock…but a good one. It really shows us what kind of person she is and how strong she is. Nice touch! :D ...