ashams123

I LOVED this so much! The words you used to describe love were absolutely perfect! The flow of each little set of words is a little off...but I think with ...

I like the way you wrote this...but, the way you tried to rhyme didn't really work in my opinion. I think if you thought deep and hard about this, you ...

I don't know if these are your own real feelings put into your poem, but I feel every single word you put into this. It hurts me, but reflects my ...

I totally understand what you are saying with this! I am an artist so this was worded perfectly. I love how your words flowed together. The imagery made me want ...

I loved how you worded this. I write things like this all the time! But I feel like it's just words put together in a beautiful way...there is no real ...