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  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Writer's Block Since I Was Born

    This poem uses irony very well. with just the certain sentences a bit gawky in their positions, but the use of irony not being able to write to write this ...

    Jan 16, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Quiet

    This is a very interesting narrative. The plot is mysterious as it is aided by the use of language features such as similes and metaphors are very well used to ...

    Jan 16, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Mia - Coco's Side

    This plot has a lot of potential, but there is a lack of depth. The characters could have a better description with their personality and appearance put into better detail, ...

    Jan 16, 2013


Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses.
— Ann Landers