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So I really liked this piece, I was spellbound, I like the way you describe things. I read an other piece by you, and I can see, that you have ...

WOW I am a sucker for descriptive language. I am definitely your FAN. I love it. I could absolutely HEAR a soft velvety voice read the words to me. painting ...

Hi. I actually like your poem. I like the description that you give. The flames snarled at the twigs... I just don't get the story behind your poem. what happened? ...

wow. i like this. i like the parallel you put in there from the doll to the girls like dolls. I see people like that all around me, and that's ...

OK... Half him and half her course through my veins I like it, except, it maybe doesnt have enough feeling in it. You just state the facts. They are there ...

At first I thought you were writing about a person. But I love that it didn't turn out as a depressing poem. I simply loved it. Its so wow. Keep ...

Since German is my mother tongue, I should be able to help you, so pm me if I can help you with other stuff, because the story is perfect(German). Do ...

WOW!! I wouldn't have thought it would end like this. OMG. Shocker. But is really good. How about you write on, like I don't know, a few parts more? I ...

Wow that was actually very good. I am new at this, so I don't rally know what to write, but I really liked it. Id love it if you posted ...