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She's a hopeless dreamer . . . .

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Belinda Cabbotry: Alter Number Three (PART 19)

    No need to say sorry, and thank you for clarifying everything. :) You're welcome. I'm glad I could help. Wow, you have planned the story incredibly well. It has certainly ...

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Ruthless Killer | Unedited

    Garrett is not her father. I think you got mixed-up because I said Jadiah considers Garrett as her father. Perhaps, I should change it to uncle? I'll see if I ...

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Ruthless Killer | Unedited

    Sorry about the random numbers and symbols. I don't know why they are there. :/

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Ruthless Killer | Unedited

    Haha. I guess, you%u2019re right. xD Shifters is a short term for shape-shifters. I%u2019ll see if I can continue it in the future sometime. I%u2019ll keep your suggestions in mind ...

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: The Harsh Reality | Edited

    Sorry! I don't understand why there are random symbols and numbers in my reply. :/

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: The Harsh Reality | Edited

    Thank you for review, and for starring my poem. I greatly appreciate it. :) 1. Instead of unrecognized, what about unaddressed? 2. I%u2019ll change it. 3. I%u2019m highlighting the fact ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Rebels Part 2

    No problem! Glad I could help.

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Little Sister Chapter 10 (Unedited)

    Thank you for telling me that. I'm afraid I didn't have the time to read the previous one.

    Sep 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spelling

    That's another spotlight-deserving poem! Great job. :D

    Sep 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Defying Fate- Chapter 1

    I thought flashbacks were fine. They did (sort of) bring the scenes together. No problem! Glad I could help. :) I didn't receive a notification for it. You can tag ...

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Handwriting

    I'm jealous of you. Seriously. How do you write such meaningful poems? That was awesome because I could totally relate to it. Great job! :D

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Script » Dramatic, Romantic Re: An Effed Up Love Life

    No problem! If you don't like happy endings, that's fine. Make it bittersweet. Perhaps, Danny becomes an accountant and, even years later, doesn't find the girl of his dreams. Any ...

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: The Profane Parables and Other Nihilistic Narrations by a Perverse Pariah, 5

    I disagree about one small thing. The period should come after the quotation mark. It comes before the speech marks.

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fanfiction Re: Faith - Chapter Six

    You're welcome! :D

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Faith - Chapter Three

    Hehe. Don't mention it. For the fourth one, try: I would then come into the school and wherever I would sit down, I would feel like simply dropping my head ...

    Sep 2, 2015


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price