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Re: Belinda Cabbotry: Alter Number Three (PART 19)
No need to say sorry, and thank you for clarifying everything. :) You're welcome. I'm glad I could help. Wow, you have planned the story incredibly well. It has certainly ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Ruthless Killer | Unedited
Garrett is not her father. I think you got mixed-up because I said Jadiah considers Garrett as her father. Perhaps, I should change it to uncle? I'll see if I ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Ruthless Killer | Unedited
Sorry about the random numbers and symbols. I don't know why they are there. :/
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Ruthless Killer | Unedited
Haha. I guess, you%u2019re right. xD Shifters is a short term for shape-shifters. I%u2019ll see if I can continue it in the future sometime. I%u2019ll keep your suggestions in mind ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: The Harsh Reality | Edited
Sorry! I don't understand why there are random symbols and numbers in my reply. :/
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: The Harsh Reality | Edited
Thank you for review, and for starring my poem. I greatly appreciate it. :) 1. Instead of unrecognized, what about unaddressed? 2. I%u2019ll change it. 3. I%u2019m highlighting the fact ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: The Rebels Part 2
No problem! Glad I could help.
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Little Sister Chapter 10 (Unedited)
Thank you for telling me that. I'm afraid I didn't have the time to read the previous one.
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: Spelling
That's another spotlight-deserving poem! Great job. :D
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: Defying Fate- Chapter 1
I thought flashbacks were fine. They did (sort of) bring the scenes together. No problem! Glad I could help. :) I didn't receive a notification for it. You can tag ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Handwriting
I'm jealous of you. Seriously. How do you write such meaningful poems? That was awesome because I could totally relate to it. Great job! :D
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: An Effed Up Love Life
No problem! If you don't like happy endings, that's fine. Make it bittersweet. Perhaps, Danny becomes an accountant and, even years later, doesn't find the girl of his dreams. Any ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: The Profane Parables and Other Nihilistic Narrations by a Perverse Pariah, 5
I disagree about one small thing. The period should come after the quotation mark. It comes before the speech marks.
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Faith - Chapter Six
You're welcome! :D
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Faith - Chapter Three
Hehe. Don't mention it. For the fourth one, try: I would then come into the school and wherever I would sit down, I would feel like simply dropping my head ...
Sep 2, 2015
