artybirdy

Thanks for the detailed review! You have pointed out the errors I, and the other reviewers, didn't see/notice at all. I'll fix them as soon as possible. :)

That was harsh! You could have given your opinions nicely.

No problem!

:)

Sorry! :( I don't know how to do that spoiler thingy.

As requested, here are the nitpicks (changes are in bold ): Before my parents…be--before I....she....they--. Before my parents . . . be—before I . . . she . . . ...

Of course I'll help you! I should have another review on nitpicks by the end of this week. :)

There's no pressure on you to continue this story (though it would be nice). Do whatever you feel would be best. :) No problem at all! I enjoyed reviewing this.

Oh, thanks for pointing that out! Glad you liked it. :) Thanks for your "review"!

No problem! I'll save the next part for later. :)

Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)

Oh, and thanks again for the suggestion about the mother. I'll add it in soon!

I'll break up the stanzas. :) Glad you enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your review! I really appreciate it.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :) I'll seperate the sections.

No problem! :)