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That's exactly what I tried to convey. Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

I'll surely edit the poem soon to make it more organised. I guess the "I'm sorry" and "you" bits sound repetitive. I changed sixth stanza's last line. Is it better ...

And, wow! 9 sisters? That must be chaotic. xD

Hello! I'm glad you could relate to the poem. You got the meaning absolutely right. Thanks for taking the time to review my work. I appreciate it. :)

Oh! I get it. No problem. Glad I could help. :)

*sighs* Okay, as you wish.

Yay! I'm eager to read it now. :D

You have a Wattpad account?! Send me a link to it. I'd love to check out your stories on there (if you have any).

You're quick at giving reviews. :D

No problem! Glad I could help. Aww, let me know if you need me to review anything else. It might take a while to get to it though.

No problem!

No problem! Ah, I see. Near the end, you said: Her legs were bleeding and her right leg has lost half of its calf but she could only think of ...

I loved the quotes; they are so inspiring! Thanks for sharing them! :D Another thanks for such a positive review. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Thanks for your review! I'm glad you liked my poem. :) I edited it according to the suggestions you gave. I'll keep the rating as 16 then. Thanks again!

Wow! This has helped me out a lot. Thanks for a detailed review! I can see/understand the issues in my storytelling and will work on it as soon as possible. ...