artybirdy

Wow! This is amazing! I seriously can't see any errors or faults in this piece. Everything I wanted to say has been said by other users. I'm totally speechless. It's ...

Wow, this is brilliant! You've really shown us how the last few moments of our lives feel like. A very good comparative with 'an old candle flame'. I really like ...

It was very interesting! I like your simplistic approach to convey a very strong and important message. Indeed, 'ugly is beautiful', and 'beautiful is ugly'. I’ve made some changes; the ...

It's a great story, and has a lot of potential. But, there are many things that needs improving. From what I've learned in my English lessons, it is better to ...