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I really like this a lot, and I think you did an excellent taste in poetry and it's really AWESOME!. I love this, I can feel this feeling wrapped up ...

Hey, this is really great, I like how you poured your emotions into this, it makes the reader connect to it more, knowing you wrote it from your heart. I ...

Oh my gosh, you've just like blown my mind! I love how you captured the ideal image of being stuck behind a dark curtain of fear, watching as the person ...

This was a well executed piece of poetry! It was very moving, I felt as if I was the one swimming in pavement! I loved how you used a somewhat ...

I really enjoyed this, I think this a well written work of art. I've actually been their, several times and because of it know I feel just like you described ...

This is a really good story line! I really enjoyed the fact that it's a short story, but I encourage you to go further. Even though it works as a ...

This is really good! when I read this, I felt as if I could almost feel that pain you described. I actually can relate to this, for I was Just ...