artistpersona

Thank you! My poems are very random, and I can't really explain where the inspiration comes from. This one vaguely links to my life, in which I always feel like ...

Thanks, I really appreciate the criticism from both of you. :) I tend to just like trying to rhyme, and don't pay attention to... anything else. Gotta work on that.

Wow, this is very good. At first I didn't know if I'd like it, but I do - it reads smoothly and actually kept my attention quite well. I can't ...