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Ok first, thank you. This was amazing. Second, I should clarify something. When they say race, they mean species, sorcerer, caster, faerie, wizard etc... not ethnicity. For wahtever, I don't ...

Thanks, I'll look into those. The spelling "Billie" versus "Billy" Is actualy a girl's name, and I got the idea from British actress/singer Billie Piper, but I'll try to clarify ...

Did I ever tell you I posted more? I have more chapters, which is perfect for another review day, and I'll be returning the favor at some point, I promise. ...

Thank you, I'll look into all this. And I've actually already written the whole book, just haven't posted the whole thing yet xD.

hey thanks so much for reviewing. For various reasons, Billie's mother wants to keep her from going to the realm, so a court case was exactly what she wanted...I'll work ...

I'm from the US, I just stay up at all night, sometimes...it's a bad habit...

*is" You are pointing out weak spots and it's absolutely lovely, guess this is what happens when i don't sleep xD.

Oh, wait, miscommunication. What I meant if you are pointing out the weak spots which is exactly what I need and thank you again :).

Like I said, I need you to point out the weak spots. I'll try to make this flow better...

Thank you, and welcome to the site! I'll be sure to return the favor as soon as I can. :) And were you perhaps looking for Alpha? Link to the ...

Very useful, especially the bit about furrows...I've been doing that wrong for a while :D

Thanks, I'll flesh out this scene and then break it up xD

So yes, super late. I'm actually moving right now so things are really crazy but I'm getting and loving your reviews and I'll post more soon I promise!

Yeah, it was originally part of another chapter, but I broke it off so that one wouldn't get super long. Anyway, thanks!

I'll admit, when you said that part earlier, I laughed because I knew it was coming. I'll look into character consistencies. And let me say this about Lucian. He's both ...