artemis15sc

I'm a college drop-out, actually, but I guess I haven't worked it all out of my system, yet. xD

Thank you! Also, posting the next chapter was a mistake, so I attached that part two chapter, which I just posted if you want to take a look. :)

Thanks for the review. Even though the act of protest was an important moment in Vietnam's history, that's not actually what this poem is about. It's solely about the image ...

Note: This review has been deleted
Hey fellow team member! Sorry, I haven't read the previous chapters, the points from the green room are just too alluring... Anyway, let me say that even though I haven't ...

Thanks so much!

Thanks so much. This is very helpful. xD

Thanks so much. Mostly I have to keep this under 500 words, so I rushed things in a few places... you're review was super helpful so thanks so much. Feel ...

Thanks so much for your review. xD As far as point of view goes, I actually wanted this to be teenage Ivy retelling the story of her childhood. It's been ...

Thanks so much. And yes, this is actually teenage Ivy retelling her story. xD

Thanks so much. This is actually being told by Ivy when she's fifteen-sixteen, not when she's a child, if that helps the narrator make more sense.

Thanks Deanie! Just one little quick comment. Everyone is pretty because they use magic to alter their appearance. I've been trying to contrast this with the rustland, where everyone is ...

Sorry for the double post... My computer malfunctioned...

Just a quick comment on your first issue. I do agree that you should bring up rape victims or pregnancies with medical complications whenever you talk about abortions. However, I ...

Note: This review has been deleted
Hey sorry it took me so long, but I promise I'm going to see this one through to the end. I loved the way you described her interaction with Hayden. ...

It was like the most adorable dream ever. They went on a date. Like an actual date. Hiking, actually. And they were like, holding hands and laughing and kissing and ...