arielleb

hello :)) I liked this poem, its short and its simple however i think your rhyming restricted you from evolving this into something deeper and more emotional. I mean, if ...

"gunpower is fragrant and blood is sweet" I love these lines, deffinetly continue it. perhaps talk about why some humans find blood to be sweet and gunpowder fragrant . Like ...

hello :) i really liked the begining of your story actually. I loved the way you described the feeling of a page turner and the suspense and excitement of the ...