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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Ballet of Tears

    Awww. Thank you.

    Feb 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Ballet of Tears

    Only twice? I can't do that. What if you had to pee or something?

    Feb 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Ballet of Tears

    Thanks for the review. I actually have been looking for a review that has constructive criticism, so thanks for that! The waterfall thing, now that you mentioned it, should be ...

    Feb 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Ballet of Tears

    Clara wow! My favorite dance from there was Waltz of the Snowflakes and the Grand Pas de Deux with The Sugar Plum Fairy at the end. My absolute favorite parts ...

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Ballet of Tears

    Really? I'm blushing again

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Ballet of Tears

    I don't dance ballet, but I love watching it. Do you take a more classical approach or do you prefer more contemporary modern ballet. What's your dream role? I always ...

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Hatred Meets a Child

    Stay strong and proud of your culture. They're just ignorant people, fearful people. It will get better

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Ballet of Tears

    Really? Eeek!!! So happy right now. I'm still blushing and grinning like an idiot. I hate blushing

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Ballet of Tears

    Thanks for the review and the nice things you said about the poem! I'm blushing. Do you think there is anything I need to fix or edit?

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Ballet of Tears

    Thank you so much for the review! I'm blushing because of your comment. Do you think there's anything I should fix or edit out. I didn't edit this one.

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: .

    your welcome! :)

    Feb 6, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: my jeopardy of late-night thoughts

    Your welcome. What was your inspiration for this? Music? A book? Movie?

    Feb 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Where We Lie

    Thank you for the review and nice things you said about this poem. I actually wasn't so confident with this one. I'm kriffing blushing reading this review

    Feb 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Where We Lie

    Thanks for the review! Yeah I tried to keep it shorter, but I couldn't help but continue. If it's too long (which is my main concern), what do you think ...

    Feb 4, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Where We Lie

    Thank you so much! I'm kriffing blushing. Yeah the capitalization sucks, the auto cap is horrible and sometimes I forget it happened. Thanks for the review!

    Feb 4, 2021


The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening