antigone

Call me shallow, but I couldn't get past the first chapter in LOTR. The movies are awesome though! Way better than the Harry Potter movies, which kind of sucked. But ...

Whoah, I liked that. Sounds like you're beating someone up. I love the rythym in this, and it's really well worded. I agree with Sam about the 'I gonna mend...' ...

Yeah it was a little too emo in the beginning maybe, but I liked it. Good atmosphere. There were a few minor grammar mistakes you could fix if you read ...

I like it! It kinda made my head hurt though. I loved the last line. Only critisizm I have is iin the very beginning it seemed a little awkward maybe... ...

I love it. I agree with Jennafina about the needle images and I also loved the "Good things come to those who wait"' stanza. I didn't think it was too ...

I like it, personally I think the flow is fine. My only suggestion might be to change Drilled and invaded at the hands of hands unfit for invading; ones better ...

Actually, I liked this. For some reason I liked it even better before I knew what it was about. Weird. But then again, it does give driving an interesting twist. ...

Wow, I loved it. I don't think you need to expand it. The language is perfect, it seems urgent but also precise and almost dreamy. Crystaline. I'm not making much ...

Yeah, it is really good. The only thing that confused me was in the second stanza the first line says "dreams of flying" and then the last line "has now, ...

This is good. Maybe in the beginning there was a tiny bit too much GREY, but then again that is sort of the point. So whatever. The only other thing ...

I loved it. Very intersting and well done. The only thing that bugs me is the bolded lines. It seems kind of like in a comic strip where some words ...

I especially liked the first line. I love how it started and it sounded like it was not the begining of something. Er, I'm not explaining it very well, but ...

Wow. That's amazing. It made my blood run cold. Seriously chilling. The prologue especially was great, it's so graphic but it doesn't sound at all cliche or like you did ...

Hmm... I like it. the cage is unlocked and 20 turns to 10. you can hardly see the sun that's painted in the west I love this stanza. they quickly ...

Hey, I read "East", that's a good book. But anyway, nice poem. I like the part about polluted burnt down logged forests, it had nice rythym and rhyme and stuff. ...