anti-pop

Tip: on YWS, make your posts a little shorter - you'll get more reviews. Wow, man. Wow. This entry was fantastic. Wonderfully executed; the description was especially beautiful. I can't ...

Hi Miriam. I'm Pop. Nice to meet you. ^_^ First off - this wasn't half bad! There's quite a few grammatical errors, but I'm not going to linger on those ...

Hi, cmarie. ^_^ I haven't critiqued poetry for a while, so let's see what I can do here. I want to die, I want to cry, to feel closer to ...

Pokeflute! *hugs* Sorry this took so long. I know, I suck. Before I begin, let me say that I very much enjoyed this. Now, I am a huge horror fan. ...

Aww, Meep. :( You had me in tears. No joke. *pulls out hankie* This is the shortest thing I've ever read that has made me tear up; it was executed ...

Hi, dancingclouds. I'm anti-pop, and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ Since this seems like a rough draft, I'm just going to run through it and edit before I make ...

Hi, Eimear! I don't think we've met. ^_^ I'm Pop, and I'm just going to give a quick review of this today. A line-by-line of this would take far too ...

Hiya, Meep! I was just scrolling the front page and this caught my eye. Now, I don't normally review much I see on the homepage, but I couldn't stop reading ...

Here as requested, Shina! :D Warning: I'm really no good at this kind of thing, but I will give it my best. xD Another one of my 50 second poems. ...

Hi, asxz! Here as requested. I'm sorry this took so long. Life can get a bit hectic, ya know? :) Anyways. Shall we venture onwards? Any nit-picks I noticed have ...

^_^ Oh, this was so much fun to read! The scene in Kayla's apartment pretty much sums up me and my friends. You most definitely have the entertainment aspect of ...

I am on a roll, I tell ya! No worries on punctuation. You'll get the hang of it. Aaand, I'm here to help out! ^^ “You told him no?” Delilah ...

Moriah! Miss me? xD Since this is very short, this will most likely be comprised of just annoying grammar suggestions. Maybe it was from Keith, professing his undying devotion to ...

Nit-picky Pop is back! ^^ Alright, I'm glad more of this is up! This was a good (part of a) chapter. I enjoyed it. Keith sounds yummy. *drool*

The Fonz = epic win. I read this on abctales the other day! This is indeed a most awesome story. I love the moral to it, even if it is ...