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Hey, Italy. (Is your username from Hetalia? Cuz if it is, that'd be cool) Overall, this was alright. Don't have anything negative to say about the letters; they were all ...

Okay, who’s whose birthday is it today? "who's" = who is She gave a sweet smile that shave shaved a few years and cautions off of her face. This was ...

Alright, cool. My favorite deadly sin. My sausage-like hand Fingers, perhaps, would make more sense. Then the cake was gone, scant crumbs decorating decorated the front of my greasy T-shirt, ...

Hi Brynn, I'm Meg. One problem with your story is that it's all tell and no show. Your story so far is basically, "This is the king, these are the ...

First off: I love the concept. Awesome idea, fish. The first man dies in Copenhagen. Fifty years of neglect have finally taken their toll on the body of Lars Jensen; ...

Please forgive me, Rose - I haven't reviewed poetry in so long. A girl emerges between the trees, her steps cautious as she walks to the roses, her soft blush ...

Run through this one more time. There's a few easy errors. I'll point out ones that really stand out: but she [s]but[/s] bit her lip and pressed on. Her mother ...

This made me laugh. Joe's narration is funny, and entertaining to read. Don't think I could read a whole book with that kind of voice, but it was still good ...

Honestly, the writing here was not bad. I enjoyed reading it, and I'd like to continue to see where this story is headed. Eyesore: I thoughtlessly tossed my keys onto ...

I would continue this. 1. You've got the base for a good plot. 2. I'm pretty sure you've got the idea of how to write horror. However, this wasn't scary ...

Ugh. How did I miss this? Well, I'm glad I found it. Been waiting! So your first part of Double Blind was absolutely fascinating; other-worldly and incredibly quirky. I'm glad ...

I don't understand poetry. By that I mean I am unable to strip something such as this down to its core in order to decipher what it means. I can't ...

Hey Mars. ;) Sorry this took so long. Since you asked about the dialogue and character portrayal in particular, I'll focus on that. (And by the by, I love this ...

Hiya, Face. I'm a bit tired, so I'm just going to jump right into the review. A boy near the front raised [s]her[/s] his hand. But something you need to ...