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Hey, darling. I have had the pleasure of reviewing the last two chapters of your story, Burrow, so I am fortunately caught up on everything that is going on. I'll ...

Hey, Jack. I finally got the time to review your work here so I'll just jump right into it because you've been waiting for awhile. Italics is your writing, bold ...

This is certainly different then the other poem, Ocean, I reviewed for you. The other one had a rhythm and flow to it and this one is just all around ...

Hey, Sam. Can I call you Sam? Remember how I mentioned the flash back thing and how you can rewrite it without actually having it be a flashback? Instead of ...

Ello, darling. I'm back again to review another one of your chapters while I read them. I'm not going to keep mentioning things about the flashbacks because you already know ...

Hey, Samanthas. Here again to review your work. You do an awful lot of flashbacks. I think you would benefit from starting from the beginning and then working up to ...

Hey, hun. I'll spare you the introduction here and jump right in. I may as well review if I'm going to read. The people in the other reviews already touched ...

Hey, EveningStar. I'd like to start off by saying Welcome to YWS. I didn't get a chance to welcome you in the last review I did for you because I ...

Hey, Castiel. I'm Nonny! I love haiku's so I was surprised to see that yours was longer then most I've seen on here. It's usual a 5x7x5 and then that ...

Hey, Samanthas. I'm Nonny and I'm going to review your chapter of Little Sister. I haven't read the previous chapters so I'm not going to comment on anything plot related ...

Hey, Amber. I'll spare you the introduction since you already know who I am. I noticed the poem isn't split up or anything like that and that makes it a ...

Hey, WalkInTheSun. I'm Nonny and I'm going to review your work today. I like to split the review up by verses but you didn't really make any verses in your ...

Hey, Vox. I'm Nonny and I'm going to review this for you. At the beginning, I know you mentioned that your professor hated the peice. Did you ever get a ...

Hey, BookWolf. I'm Nonny and I'm going to go ahead and review your poem here. I admire that you trust YWS enough to post your very first attempt of poetry ...

Hey, Margo. I'm Nonny and I'm here to review your humerous peice, My Halloweenie Don't. It took me a few minutes to realize that you were writing a play on ...