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Re: A child's tears
this is a really emotional piece that probably means a lot to you as it shows very well and in general its really good, its feels like its from both ...
Feb 26, 2025 -
Re: See Through Closet (a poem about the desire to come out.)
I love this but you used the word flesh two many times and tried to rhyme flesh with flesh anyways as a fellow trans person I respect your writing a ...
Nov 20, 2024 -
Re: Seaglass Eyes
ok so i like this but it truly lacks a general theme like it has a feeling but lacks description a way to fix that is kind of like grounding ...
Nov 20, 2024