anonymous1757

This was very interesting. I liked that the story started out with a lot of action, and it got better and better. The recording was a great device for the ...

I have no idea what's happening yet, so I'll have to reserve final judgement. It looks great so far. The prose is pretty polished and your style is really good. ...

Hello Kevin! It was a fun read. Most of the issues have already been covered by the other reviewers. The only other thing I noticed was that it reads more ...