annaseale1998

Haha, that's really fun! It's nice to read poems that arn't about really serious things, like lost loves. I thought the rhythm could have been smoother in one or two ...

Thanks! The thing about 'got care' was a mistake (thanks for spotting that, I didn't realise). Really appreciate the comments!

I really enjoyed reading this. It really made me think, and it also had a great ending.

I thought it was pretty brilliant, and that you shouldn't change much if you were to rewrite it. I loved the idea and the rhymes were great, but maybe try ...

I really liked this. It was a little bit jumpy to read, and I couldn't quite find any rhythm, but the words you chose were brilliant. I love the subject ...