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Re: I want you to notice
Hey, nice job. It flows really nicely. I want to be real, I want to be there. I want to be with you, I want you to care. I love ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Jealousy
Wow. Clever well written poem. Well done!! I think you're talented. i could say that maybe I would like to read something a bit more psychological. As you've personified jealousy ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: Play. Pause. Rewind.
Hey there! I really like how your story starts at the end. That was a really good idea. I think its good although i think you can dig even deeper ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: Unfinished story - Warsky.
Hey, the story was quite good, although I think it does not go into the atmosphere enough. I think it would be better if you made it even more personal. ...
Aug 2, 2010