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Re: ​Bruises
I like the rhyming in this poem! The rhythm felt a little awkward, and it changed at the end, but the simplicity gets the point across. The emotions contained in ...
Jul 6, 2017 -
Re: it took me centuries to perfect this solitude
This poem is absolutely beautiful. Everything from the phrasing to the structure took my breath away. Your description of solitude is so unique. Even through your description of the walls ...
Jul 6, 2017 -
Re: Inamorata
This is a beautiful poem. The repetition of the first line provides continuity throughout the stanzas and keeps the reader focused on the concept of a single rose, a rose ...
Jul 5, 2017
