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Re: That's pain!...Certain End!
Its neither a short story nor an essay. Its more like a personal blog. Whatever be it, it surely portrayed the pain the narrator is in. I am not going ...
Nov 30, 2012 -
Re: It's Supposed To Be Sunny
First and foremost the narration is brilliant. It was natural, free-flowing and unconventional-a perfect mix. And now that I've read your piece, I think I would try that someday with ...
Nov 30, 2012 -
Re: A new story (The adventure of an 8th grader)
I don not know what your age is but this is pure childish writing. If you are 12-13 then its fine, you are headed the right way but if you ...
Nov 30, 2012 -
Re: Thankful
Nice work. The poem has a nice flow, the narration simple. The concept is refreshing. The way you describe the hard times is a bit unconventional which is good. The ...
Nov 30, 2012 -
Re: I call suicide hotlines for the conversation, so tell me something about myself
Thought provoking and realistic. I liked the style used in the poem. The flow was natural which is a good thing. Refreshing from the emo-showered poems written nowadays. Keep it ...
Nov 30, 2012