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Instilled Lament
I am feeling dark.Thoughts of death come to mind.Malice, hatred, and joy are intertwined.The light vanishes; Not a flicker remain.=The joys of life turn bleak.Everything reduced to nothing.Ashes ashes
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Draft help: Prologue to the fantasy
AlexI lie here alone without hope to look forward to tomorrow, without light to guide me out of the darkness I find myself lost in. It's a morning unlike any ...
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Flash Fiction: Untimely Death
I was walking down the alley, about to make my way home just in time to get some sleep. I chanced upon this weird man in a black hood coming ...
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The Elevator Man
I opened my eyes and saw myself falling endlessly into what seemed to be a dark, bottomless pit. It was all black, endless black, not a drop of light present. ...
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The Mirror
“I once fell in love with who I knew was the best. Now that I crushed him, and moved on, I find myself missing what seemed to be my whole ...
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Draft help: Prologue to the fantasy ver 2
PROLOGUEAlexHow did I let this happen? The first thing that popped in my mind as I regain consciousness. The mornings I have now are different unlike the ones I had ...
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A Little Fantasy Chapter 1: A New Beginning
From my blogsite==================================Prologue HERE Thanks to Aquamarine for helping me in my prologue.Here's the continuation of this chapterPlease critique both versions if you can =====
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A Little Fantasy Chapter 1 continuation
Here's the final update of my chapter 1.Here's the prologueAnd here's the current chapter 1Please critique the works above as well if you have time.The following will be added to ...
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Save Me
From my wordpress===================I dreamed of a thousand nights and just one day.I wonder what took you so far, far away.But you’re not here, and you’re not there.Yet I feel your ...
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I still do
“I’m sorry” was all I could say,Yet you still kept on your saddens me now that you’re gone;I suffer from what I’ve done.===Seasons change, the sun rises and falls.I stand ...
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A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten
Thanks for viewing. If you have spare time, please review the following as well. Please be brutal The more detailed the review the better. Also, please tell me if my ...
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(Untitled)
It's really untitled, so if you can think of any titles, please by all means share it. Also, I was wondering whether the ending is just right or lacking. I ...