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Re: the burning man
what a really good interpretation! thank u for sharing
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Re: what is, but not i?
thank you so much for the review!! i wanted to keep the poem simple and straight to the point to show the reader that the answers were direct and weren%u2019t ...
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Re: what is, but not i?
hi! thank you for your kind review!! you hit iton the target. the last line is answering the questions as they were written. who am i? the answer is the ...
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Re: perhaps we might meet the other half of the universe
so well thought out!! i love it. thank you for sharing
Dec 13, 2022 -
Re: the burning man
what a wonderful take on this! your game is on point.
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Re: Eternity and a Day
of course! i'm excited to read more.
Dec 8, 2022 -
Re: True Angel #4: Corp. Cleo Carson's Journal, Entry 1
no, no, i totally understand! that's why i said its a personal writing- as in a character.
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Re: an ode to absence
aw, thank you so much!! i never gave thought to the usage of the word "dangling" but now that you mention it, it does seem a bit out of place. ...
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Re: an ode to absence
thank you so much! i agree with the importance of capitalization; however, my personal style is lowercase! to me, writing poetry in all caps is "loud" poetry. demanding... i don't ...
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Re: an ode to absence
thank you so much!! i appreciate it.
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Re: Home
howdy! this is well written, i love the subject. its obvious and blatant, yet gives the reader room to wonder and think on their own or maybe relate. it gives ...
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Re: perhaps we might meet the other half of the universe
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Dec 7, 2022
this is very interesting!! its been a while since ive seen a poem formatted this way, so props to you for that. i am a bit intrigued as to why ... -
Re: perhaps we might meet the other half of the universe
this is very interesting!! its been a while since ive seen a poem formatted this way, so props to you for that. i am a bit intrigued as to why ...
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