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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: the burning man

    what a really good interpretation! thank u for sharing

    Dec 27, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Theatre Re: what is, but not i?

    thank you so much for the review!! i wanted to keep the poem simple and straight to the point to show the reader that the answers were direct and weren%u2019t ...

    Dec 13, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Theatre Re: what is, but not i?

    hi! thank you for your kind review!! you hit iton the target. the last line is answering the questions as they were written. who am i? the answer is the ...

    Dec 13, 2022
  • Poetry » Science, Spiritual Re: perhaps we might meet the other half of the universe

    so well thought out!! i love it. thank you for sharing

    Dec 13, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: the burning man

    what a wonderful take on this! your game is on point.

    Dec 9, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Eternity and a Day

    of course! i'm excited to read more.

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #4: Corp. Cleo Carson's Journal, Entry 1

    no, no, i totally understand! that's why i said its a personal writing- as in a character.

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: an ode to absence

    aw, thank you so much!! i never gave thought to the usage of the word "dangling" but now that you mention it, it does seem a bit out of place. ...

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: an ode to absence

    thank you so much! i agree with the importance of capitalization; however, my personal style is lowercase! to me, writing poetry in all caps is "loud" poetry. demanding... i don't ...

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: an ode to absence

    thank you so much!! i appreciate it.

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Home

    howdy! this is well written, i love the subject. its obvious and blatant, yet gives the reader room to wonder and think on their own or maybe relate. it gives ...

    Dec 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Science, Spiritual Re: perhaps we might meet the other half of the universe

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    this is very interesting!! its been a while since ive seen a poem formatted this way, so props to you for that. i am a bit intrigued as to why ...

    Dec 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Science, Spiritual Re: perhaps we might meet the other half of the universe

    this is very interesting!! its been a while since ive seen a poem formatted this way, so props to you for that. i am a bit intrigued as to why ...

    Dec 7, 2022


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