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Re: The Elementals of Atara- Chapter One (Finian)
This is a very neat piece. It incites questions for me though. Why is everything about to change? If it was said there were two girls and two boys in ...
Mar 7, 2018 -
Re: Wings
This a beautiful piece. Well thought out and executed. My thoughts on this were about a hurricane. Is this what you were going for? I love the language used, it ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: Powerless
Hi Ribena, Hope you are having a good day. Here is my review of your work. You have a really good story. I like how you set your world up ...
Mar 4, 2018