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Re: Summer
I like this poem a lot, it suits the season (of course) and the feelings that everyone has when school gets out, the only issue: All your cares and worries ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: A small series of Autumn themed haiku
Symphonies fall from Branches in swift harmony. Leaves crunch underfoot. The first line of this is a little off rythm, but overall I love this one. Trees bare themselves In ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: A pool of summer
I really love this! I is excellent and I love your use of imagery. You have a great poetry talent :D and, I am not being sarcastic! :lol:
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Mondays End In Coffeshops
Work, work work, I thought this should have another comma after the second work. I loved your poem! It is really well worded and it has great rhythm. I think ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Snowbird
Really Good! I like it a lot! I saw this on your coffee table and began reading it. I never finished it, but now that I've finished it, I love ...
Jan 21, 2008
