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Re: A soul freezer
I think this piece is very meaningful. Everyone else already told you about the grammatical issues and as you commented English isn't your first language which is understandable because me ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: Into the Deep
This wasn't 'pretty bad' it was really good. I can honestly tell you you're first attempt is way better than others. I really love this piece and imagery is amazing. ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: my story choater 1
The grammar is completely off, words are misspelled, punctuation and capitalization were not used. This piece was not reviewed by the author and seems like the writer was just bored ...
Apr 2, 2015
