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Wow! I had to actually read it out loud (which was a lame attempt to rap) so that I could do it justice. I really like the message. As well, ...

WOW! What a fantastic poem! Such amazing imagery and emotion... I loved: - the overall idea of a 'domestic civil war' - this line 'My mind and my wrists pay', ...

Hello: Some parts/things I love about your story: ~~WOW! You completely trick the reader with the first paragraph - was not expecting that ~~~I like the irony of a liar ...

Well, first, let me congratulate you on writing a song! I don't think I could ever do that. I thought that there were really high points in your lyrics. The ...

You don't hold anything back! wow.... This poem was really touching. Firstly, I think the title is perfect. The only thing I wasn't sure about was the line: Won't you ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the whimsical way it is written and how you describe some really great images and feelings ("forget all my symptoms of this adulthood ...