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I actually really like this piece. I think it was all the relatable feelings that made it so good. These are my suggestions: They never get any easier, those horrid ...

Wow! This is soooooo true! I love the irony of teachers teaching us about bullying and discrimination and self-esteem, then doing nothing when someone says, 'That's so gay', or 'Go ...

I love the voice in this. It sounds exactly like who I imagine the narrator is: blunt, heartbroken and passed caring. The first line is such a great way to ...

Honestly, it's amazing to see a guy capture a woman's feelings so completely. I really loved this. If I am Semi-Pro, and Rene is top slut, then William is the ...

I really like this poem! *clicks like* I think it's the perfect length. I think the metaphor of the fruitless tree can mean so many things so it can connect ...

Hello! Well, I started out reading this and I was like, Yeah, another rhyme-filled poem about bad choices and being depressed. But by the end I realized I really liked ...

Wow. Such a great message. I have some suggestions, so here it goes: How do I say the words, When you don’t want to listen to the truth? Feeling sorry ...

Wow! There were some excellent lines in this poem. Here are some thoughts: Everybody says they need somebody else, that they long for another person to hold, and without that ...

Wow! I was impressed when I figured out you included Latin! Very cool. Anyway, here's what I thought: O Celeste! I could drown in those cerulean eyes. Quam serenus! and ...

I love the bluntness of this poem. It's very refreshing. I have some questions/comments/suggestions: Dream on. Love the title. Fits it perfectly. Walk, walk, gentlemen straight and tall with your ...

Hey! Here are some things noticed/suggestions: -loved the first paragraph, great way to introduce the characters wolf like quality --- should be wolf-like quality as the singer ' s voice, ...

Hello! I really love this poem. It has a dark quality to it and I love the voice. Here are some suggestions: Preserve my arrows Preserve the memory I'm drowning ...

Wow! This is so close to a freaking amazing poem. (Excuse the mild language.) There were some really smart images and rhythms and rhymes. Here are some comments and suggestions: ...

WOW! I love this poem! Holy cow, it speaks to me. No, it's screaming in my ear. Anyway. I love it. I think there is nothing wrong with no capitals ...

I really hate when people try to mold my pieces into theirs so I won't point out every little thing you could adjust. (Really, there isn't many, anyway.) First of ...