amiemalamie

Thanks for the review theotherone :) Damn YMS changed my text slightly, the thoughts were in italics on my word doc but clearly YWS did not like this. haha. Basically, ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be reviewing tonight. Firstly don't sell yourself short, this is great. In factm I don't have any improvements for this, I like it exactly how ...

So my outbox hates me! Here's your reply... Thanks for clearing that up. Now I know what they mean they're lovely little additions to your poem making it feel authentic. ...

Ah, I see you've made some changes - Great! That ending really is perfect, I'm so glad you took my advise. You're very talented with you writing, especially at creating ...

This is so descriptive and creates some gruesome images in my mind - I love gruesome! Very well written, you definitely have a way with words. So dark, just the ...

Thanks Dave, I appreciate your review. So far this is my second draft of this chapter so I know I still have a lot of work to do. Thank you ...

Thank you both for you're reviews. I have revised this piece and will be posting it on here shortly if you'd like to read it :) Thanks again P.S I ...