amelie

Thank you:)

I really like this; short and sweet. :)

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Hey Matt. So clearly this is based off of the song marmalade mentioned. And it's really awesome that you were inspired by it, but looking at the lyrics of the ...

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oh, thank you my wife. can't say i feel the same.

Thank you:)

Thank you so much:)

Aww, thank you very much:)

Hi Moon, Waffle here for a short review. First off, welcome to YWS!! I'm so glad you found this site, it's truly an awesome place for writers seeking any sort ...

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Hi there Bm, Waffle here for a review. So I'm gonna start by saying I'm really intrigued by the concept. Now on with the review. It's a fairly short poem, ...

Hello. :) Thank you for the tips and corrections, know that they are much appreciated. You said that the last line confused you. I don't remember it either is what ...

Hey there. This review was in fact very helpful and I'd love to take your advice on this. Thank you so much!

Lovely.

Okay, thank you so much!! (As a side note, I wrote this when I was nine. So yes, I know, it's got some mistakes, but I am not sure whether ...