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Hi again. :) My big issue with this was the grammar again. I Can't Belive I Go Again Believe. This line, even with the rest of the stanza, doesn't make ...

Hi! I'm Kat and I'll be one of your reviewers today. Poetry's not my strong suite, even if it is in a novel, and I haven't reviewed in a million ...

You didn't put an 'r' in everybody like there should be. Oh, and there should be a comma after 'sweet' in stanza one, line six. :) That's my only real ...

Personally, I loved this, although I'm not sure what pick-up line you're talking about. My only critique is the double "thats," which has already been pointed out several times. As ...

Hi! Sorry it took me so long to get to this. he definitely appeared to have an air of confidence about him. How did he appear to have an air ...

Hi Xirenia!I loved this but mainly because I can identify with it. But it was decked out with all this white minimalistic crap. That's exactly how most therapist's waiting rooms ...

Sasha gave all the nitpicks so I'm going to talk about Warren and Foster. I honestly have no idea which one I like better. Foster's more mysterious but Warren's really ...

I apologize again. I'm being lazy. Once again, everyone has good suggestions. As for the beginning: I'd describe how she feels around Foster. What does she feel about him being ...

To be honest, everything I noticed was already pointed out by the other reviews. The first part of the story (the beginning) confused me a little with what the class ...

Hi Jayleigh! I'm a little rusty so I apologize in advance. “What are you doing after school?” The only problem with this that I have is that it doesn't grab ...

I have to agree with Vox. It's good it was an eye-opener for you, though. Why didn’t we know about it? He probably didn't want his problems to be broadcasted ...

Sarah Dessen is good, as someone else said. I love books by Laurie Halse Anderson. Fever 1793 is the first book of hers that I read. It's historical fiction but ...

Hi Sofi. First of all, I want to say that this was really well written. I only have a few nitpicks. I had fun that morning. Helping Mum decide what ...

Hi LibraLoo! I'm Kat and I'll be your reviewer today. :) First of all, welcome to YWS! Second of all, thanks for following the 2:1 policy. "DAMMIT!" Just a little ...

Hi Eco! I'm really sorry it took me this long to get to this. The first, hatred and denial ; Since you capitalized the other two stages and the semi-colon ...