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me and my harsh critiques (for which i apologize) are back! alright lesee... My mother walked over to me and grabbed the nearest brush. this is fine grammatically but it ...

Here i am to do my copy editor act. sorry if it kinda tears your work to shreds. just the way i am. I got to my feet, took a ...

Okay, I'm going to do my nit picky copy editor act. sorry, just the way I am. first off, syllable-wise, the whole thing totally skips around from comparative, adjacent lines. ...

Critiques wanted? oh boy! i get invited to poison pen something. :D alright here are my nit-picky problems with this. The Captain sat leisurely with his feet atop his maple ...

I don't know how qualified i am to be critiquing this, but here goes :? The rain fell with a sickening rate against the roof tops. I don't think sickening ...