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I really enjoyed this piece. It has a very wise tone to it, like you know from experience that all of these things work. You are speaking to the reader ...

This was an extremely interesting story to read. Is it a short story or a beginning to a book? I can see it going either way. I thought the idea ...

I think most readers can definitely relate to this on a personal level. This piece was wonderfully worded and beautifully constructed. Your verb choice especially caught my attention ( terrorizing, ...

This was a humorous and very true poem that I think a lot of readers can relate to. We all desire the fun and time of the summer months, but ...

This was excellent and I was hooked from the first text conversation. The relationship between Landon and Kenna was enviable and something that I think a lot of people crave. ...

Over all, the plot was enticing and suspenseful. The sentences were very short and made the piece sound choppy and scattered. There were a few capitalization errors as well as ...

This was fantastic. As a reader, I could feel the pain that you were feeling as though the poem was about me and my life. It was well written and ...