alliyah1234

Holy Jebus! I think it'd be safe to say that we've all had our fair share of experiences like this. You capture it so precisely; the heartbreaking moment when you ...

Hey Audy, Thanks for the feedback I tried the words you suggested and it just doesn't fit well. I'm not sure if it's a personal thing, but yeah i'm not ...

I like how it's so simple, yet you manage to plant some powerful words into the poem without making it seem out of place. Kind of get me ? :D

Thanks for the feedback :D There's several more to come, I just need to get points!

Very descriptive (:

This really pinches a nerve in every person, because the truth is.. nobody wants to take off their mask, their afraid they'll be judged for the real person they are.

Thankyou so much for your feedback! I'll be sure to PM you as soon as I post the chapter :) I have written three, but don't have enough points to ...

Empowering, and not too wordy. I like XD

How can something so outrageously simple be so moving? :O Guess it shows the power behind words

This is incredible and really emphasises the fact that you don't choose a name, it chooses you. I bet you're a really special kid to go with that really special ...