alittlelost

Absolutely love this! Your descriptions are vivid and impactful. I love concept you’ve chosen to describe and especially the words you’ve chosen to use. The lines, “that mirror was my ...

Absolutely adore the descriptions and words used; the line ‘with wings bearing rotting fruits’ was truly amazing. The scene was set magically and tastefully. Regardless I find this creature (as ...

I’m not an expert, but in my opinion, I think that it would serve you better if the piece was put into paragraphs. This way it would look less overwhelming ...