aliceceleste

Thank you for the feedback, I've gone back over it and made some changes :)

Thank you, I'll think about my use of commas :)

Hahaha it will probably take me ages anyway, so that's alright hehe:)

Thanks so much, I'll take that on board! I will definitely write the next chapter as soon as possible :)

Hey thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

Thanks very much, I'll think about that!

Thanks for the review, I didn't know I had switched from third to first- oops!

Thank you very much for the feedback, I hadn't even realised that I wrote 'grew' twice so I will try to check better next time. I completely understand what you ...

Hey no problem for reviewing, and thank you for telling me how to do the quotes- I had no idea so that is very helpful :)

Thanks very much! :)

Thank you, I will think about your improvements :)

Ok, thanks for the constructive criticism, I understand where you're coming from. I think I was focusing more on the creative aspect of it to look too much into the ...

Thanks very much, I'll take that on board! :)

This was so beautifully written, in a simple sort of way. I was really touched as I read this, and the way you wrote this, I could tell it was ...

Ah thanks so much, that means a lot to me! :)